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Old July 30th, 2010, 08:29 PM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Thanks for your comment Zach. Will work on it But once there are some images and thumbnails etc it will be have more colour ofcourse.
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Old July 30th, 2010, 09:07 PM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

I would urge you not to go into the coding stand quite yet, I personally would say its not quite finished. I would say your trying to put to much text and content in such a small area. It seems very squashed together and because of this I don't think its a very nice browsing experience. (I hate websites which are just full of text from top to bottom.)

There are quite a few little things which could be changed.
  • The black text at the top doesn't contrast with the blue background.
  • The text in the footer doesn't seem aligned to anything, it just randomly starts a new line and the links are floating in the middle of no-where.
  • The roll-over effect is hardly noticeable
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Old July 30th, 2010, 09:16 PM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Oke thanks a lot for the comment.

I will change the things and give the text some more spacing so it dont look squashed together. Update will come in 1 hour!

Updated it, please look first post!
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Old July 31st, 2010, 07:24 AM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Im sorry mate but its kind of boring. It look like the website of a small company 5 years ago.
I presume you made this: http://www.vdeshof.nl/ why not go with that style? Just that little thing > what you currently have mate. In any case hold off coding as cubone said.
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Old July 31st, 2010, 10:48 AM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Nice design, a bit too simple though.

I use the font of:
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font-family: 'Lucida Grande', 'Helvetica Neue', Arial, 'Liberation Sans', FreeSans, sans-serif;
I think it'll look better then your current font.

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Old July 31st, 2010, 11:21 AM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Thanks for the comment eagle, will add some things so it isn't boring.

And the current thing of my site is just a premade something i've found on the internet.

But I will keep the design I have right now and wait with coding and make it better

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Old July 31st, 2010, 06:13 PM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Oke i have updated it again. Hopefully now its just simple and clean but not boring:D
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Old August 1st, 2010, 01:21 AM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Stefan, please do not get too inspired for your 2nd version as you did with the first, your old one was similar to MJ Walsh's and now this version seems too similar to mine for certain aspects of the website.

Look at your header / navigation / page title compared to mine, quite similar, aside from the colours the layout and shapes are basically the same.

http://shane-egan.com/portfolio.php

As well, this may not seem like much, your Next and Previous buttons but you did not even seem to change them from mine? Its only an arrow which I made but regardless, make an effort to create your own items of your site.

I do not mean to bash but please review your design as if published, I feel they would just be too similar.
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Its a nice simple simple template. Too simple for my taste tbh, but thats a personal view
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Old August 1st, 2010, 11:39 AM
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Re: [WIP]New version of my website

Damn you are right shane-egan!

I'm really sorry! I was inspired by you but now you say it looks kinda the same it realises me that it does look bit the same!

I'm really sorry. I will just let this how it is and make a new design for my website.


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